poems
poems
any one else like to right poems? now and again i do, if any one else dose fill free to post some here i love to read them, i will be posting alot.
wispy smoke twisting rising rising rising, still.
a taste like flowers, like your hair
rolling tongues soften softer than anything
of such sweetness i could only have dreamed
but the dream is real, it happened it is happening
it will happen again, it is real.
EDIT:-- Justin Sane
^^^ opps sorry modified if i disapointed you, wasnt intentinal.
wispy smoke twisting rising rising rising, still.
a taste like flowers, like your hair
rolling tongues soften softer than anything
of such sweetness i could only have dreamed
but the dream is real, it happened it is happening
it will happen again, it is real.
EDIT:-- Justin Sane
^^^ opps sorry modified if i disapointed you, wasnt intentinal.
Last edited by zachatree on 28 Oct 2004 18:07, edited 1 time in total.
She is the devil in disquise.
She knows how to hypnotize.
Stealing souls is her game.
She goes by the name of Cocaine.
She can make a good man steal,
An honest man lie,
A mother leave her children,
And none of them know why.
She can tear a family in two.
Take everything that belongs to you.
She has no feelings and does not care,
So, if you meet her, walk away.
She knows how to hypnotize.
Stealing souls is her game.
She goes by the name of Cocaine.
She can make a good man steal,
An honest man lie,
A mother leave her children,
And none of them know why.
She can tear a family in two.
Take everything that belongs to you.
She has no feelings and does not care,
So, if you meet her, walk away.
Nice Zach!
I'm not really into writing much poetry but I read a bit. This is something I read recently and really liked. Having now read the whole poem - I like the last 5 lines a lot more than I like the rest of the poem
So when the last and dreadful hour
This crumbling pageant shall devour,
The trumpet shall be heard on high,
The dead shall live, the living die,
And Music shall untune the sky.
John Dryden
You can find the whole poem here:
http://www.poetry-archive.com/d/a_song_ ... s_day.html
I'm not really into writing much poetry but I read a bit. This is something I read recently and really liked. Having now read the whole poem - I like the last 5 lines a lot more than I like the rest of the poem
So when the last and dreadful hour
This crumbling pageant shall devour,
The trumpet shall be heard on high,
The dead shall live, the living die,
And Music shall untune the sky.
John Dryden
You can find the whole poem here:
http://www.poetry-archive.com/d/a_song_ ... s_day.html
it was in the room
it was too late
all i could do was suficate
what is there now
what else could i do
could i run
could i run
could i hide
could i hide
i could
i wont
death came slow
but it came for sirtien
till my breath
was all but broken
then noting
notingness
i just came up with one up i call it "The Pleg"
it was too late
all i could do was suficate
what is there now
what else could i do
could i run
could i run
could i hide
could i hide
i could
i wont
death came slow
but it came for sirtien
till my breath
was all but broken
then noting
notingness
i just came up with one up i call it "The Pleg"
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Wow Zach! I didn't know you were this.... I don't know the word for it but just wow.
Here mine and don't laugh, I not that good.
Deep inside the critzied
There a kid whos dead inside
He sits alone inside his room
And whene the sun raises outside and starts a new
So will he inside
^ That my sad ass atempt and I too 'pulled it out of my ass'!
Here mine and don't laugh, I not that good.
Deep inside the critzied
There a kid whos dead inside
He sits alone inside his room
And whene the sun raises outside and starts a new
So will he inside
^ That my sad ass atempt and I too 'pulled it out of my ass'!
I think I going to take over Canada. You should help.
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(quietly sneaks up behind Zach, slips him a note)
*disguise is spelled with a g not a q*
but thanks. i took about 10 seconds to write that poem. im gonna go make a techno song now
*disguise is spelled with a g not a q*
but thanks. i took about 10 seconds to write that poem. im gonna go make a techno song now
JSACK wrote:alright well me and obara'bars, shredded our dicks off, since we are both in high school, obviously there is some sort of talent show
the elections been fixed
the proof is in florida
blank ballots count for bush
our democracy's over.
--
See
the proof is in florida
blank ballots count for bush
our democracy's over.
--
See
Chillin flex
i wrote a few to day at school
there is no sensation to compare with this
a taste like flowers, a smell of sweet bliss
light travles slower, movment come to a standstill
am i dreaming? is this real?
did i do what i was trying
or did i only do half
it dosen't matter
noting ever matters
as long as i got the plants
i wrote a few to day at school
there is no sensation to compare with this
a taste like flowers, a smell of sweet bliss
light travles slower, movment come to a standstill
am i dreaming? is this real?
did i do what i was trying
or did i only do half
it dosen't matter
noting ever matters
as long as i got the plants
right wing o' right wing
believe in so much crap
associations with sadaam
al quida and iraq
The truth has been written
evangelical christians have somethin' missin'
oh say can I see a crusader on a mission
listen to the man
the shogun and cameron
I see death between the lines
and bush's powerful plannin'
if the votes were counted right
both the towers would be standing
believe in so much crap
associations with sadaam
al quida and iraq
The truth has been written
evangelical christians have somethin' missin'
oh say can I see a crusader on a mission
listen to the man
the shogun and cameron
I see death between the lines
and bush's powerful plannin'
if the votes were counted right
both the towers would be standing
Last edited by Tsiangkun on 28 Oct 2004 17:09, edited 1 time in total.
Re: poems
Wow, that's a great example of plagiarism (a word which I am sure you would have trouble spelling), unless you intended to credit the author, and I somehow overlooked that part (takes a moment to look). Nope, doesn't appear that way.zachatree wrote:any one else like to right poems? now and again i do, if any one else dose fill free to post some here i love to read them, i will be posting alot.
wispy smoke twisting rising rising rising, still.
a taste like flowers, like your hair
rolling tongues soften softer than anything
of such sweetness i could only have dreamed
but the dream is real, it happened it is happening
it will happen again, it is real.
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Keep smoking the weed Zach, I'm sure it makes it easier to at least fool yourself.
MattKain